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A war is never won by *eluk:iconeluk:



A war is never won.

Sending young people
just out of mothers arms
into the jaws of munitions
thrown by heroes
of another belief
to save
or secure
the commodity
of commerce.

Leaving behind
shattered families,
shattered buildings,
shattered communities
and broken lives.
Children play
on dangerous ground
losing limbs
to forgotten shells

Does no one listen
does no one care
war breeds hate
hate breeds instability
and instability breeds
an older generation
filled with the misery
of lost paternity.
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A war is never won.



Thank you Cindy for releasing this poem through inspiration
Freedom Fighter [link]
by :iconblueskye27: *Blueskye27

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:iconjust-joking:
yes, sad but true, what can we do ??? :(

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:frail: "lovehurts" but "always somewhere" there's "stairway to heaven" :frail:
:iconblueskye27:
Very nicely done, Simon.
:iconeluk:
:no:

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Simon
Smile and the whole world smiles with you :D
:iconeluk:
Thank you Cindy :heart:

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Simon
Smile and the whole world smiles with you :D
:iconhamletspants:
Very nice, Simon - I love the reflexive poems you write, in response to someone's work. It's like a little ongoing writing exercise.
:iconhamletspants:
Thanks Simon - nice work!
I had just written a rather brilliant and thought-provoking response here, then accidentally hit some combination of buttons that jumped me back about 7 pages and lost the whole thing. Dammit.

The punchline of it was, another one of my cousins got called up to active duty. One just got back in October and now this one (his brother!) is getting ready to ship. Looks like I have to sit down and write
[link]

part 2.
:iconblueskye27:
You're so welcome, Simon.
:iconwackee101:
this is so true nicely writen!

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"Gossip is so fucktarded and is one of the ultimate acts of asshatery. Gossip always proves to be untrue, so why let it bother you in the first place" Brynhildur Jónsdóttir
:iconwillyampax:
very nice and indeed true=D

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